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Post  pin-upartistSteve on Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:55 am

What did we have written down at the meeting on Wednesday? I can't remember how it went exactly. It was a good start, maybe just a few revisions and we'll have it!
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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 3:57 pm

A group of diversified artists collaborating with other community entities to create a new art scene in Des Moines

A group of diversified artists collaborating with other community entities to create a new art scene
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Post  Admin on Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:43 pm

I like the second one Des Moines part is not needed
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Post  pin-upartistSteve on Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:44 pm

ccmr50309 wrote:A group of diversified artists collaborating with other community entities to create a new art scene in Des Moines

A group of diversified artists collaborating with other community entities to create a new art scene

OK how about:
"A diverse group of artists collaborating with other community entities to enhance the art scene in Des Moines"?

Idea Grammatical note: "diverse" would be the correct word here, not "diversified". "Diversified" is a verb; "diverse" is an adjective. We could also use the word "eclectic".
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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:37 pm

all i dont like is in des moines. Sounds like we are limiting are selves to an area
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Post  Brad_&_Liberty on Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:46 pm

"A diverse group of artists working with the community to create more opportunities for artists to display their work."

I took out "entities" because it could be individuals, such as the landlord of Tim's building. I wasn't sold on the "enhancing the art scene" so I inserted "to create more opportunites for atists to display their work".

Just my ideas. I'll roll with whatever.

I'll get the minutes done in the next couple of days.
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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:39 pm

A diverse group of artists collaborating with other community bodies to enhance the art scene

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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:41 pm

A diverse group of artists collaborating with others to create a new art scene
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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:42 pm

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Post  ccmr50309 on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:49 pm

A diverse group of artists collaborating with others to create a new art scene

A diverse group of artists working with others to create a new art scene

A diverse group of artists collaborating with other community bodies to enhance the art scene

A diverse group of artists collaborating with other community bodies to create a new art scene

A diverse group of artists working with the community to create a new art scene

diverse group of artists collaborating with the community to create a new art scene
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Post  Guest on Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:32 pm

I thought is was discussed at the meeting that 'to create a new art scene' was a bit over the top. I prefer the versions that refer to our effort to enhance. I like Brad's notion about creating opportunities to display our work. Keep in mind whatever it is that prompts people to join, participate, and stay, as well as what sounds like a good fit for the community at large. I look for opporunities as well as information, networking, collaboration and support. Just a thought....Bonnie

for example...

A cooperative group of diversified artists working to create an informational network that can enhance the efforts of the individual artists while providing resources to the business, educational and social environment of the community.

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Post  Admin on Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:39 pm

Artist's making art for the people.
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Post  Brad_&_Liberty on Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:30 pm

See other thread for my two cents worth.
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Post  ccmr50309 on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:01 pm

A diverse group of local artists collaborating with the community to enhance the art scene
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